Crit

These were the points which I received from Crit yesterday.

Storyboard Changes:

Sort out the text in the storyboard (get rid of the word 'likely', don't repeat the navigation on each page if its the same - sort out some of the navigation so that it is pinching rather than swiping across)

For the room like with the Man and the typewriter instead of having 2 separate images in the storyboard, have a box around the bit that changes (the rubbish in the bin) - there is no need to repeat the images

Sort out the blurriness of the images on the storyboard

Make some of the visuals brighter - pick out the best scenes and make the other match up to that

Video Changes:

Either just have the iPad instead of the background OR come up with a decent background - try to jazz it up a bit
Sort out the pace of the video and make it some of it a bit slower - there are points in the video where it jumps and goes really quick
Have the pinch fingers in some of the navigation instead of swipe
Show a bit more of the rooms with the interactivity
Include sound - sound effects
Arrows or text to indicate the navigation
Have the speech bubbles appear once the scene has appeared rather than automatically on there
Instead of the typewriter typing 'hello', have it do a random word like this: nbfbjksdmncakms